Hi this is Thom from Yaldhurst school and I think this is very good there is lot's of cool things about you.Next time I think you should recommend putting the information on different slides.
hi hilal i'm louis from yaldhurst model school.i liked how you put your favourite food on your post. next time you should do a slide instsed.i liked it when you said you like pizza.
Hi I am Alize from Yaldhurst school. what I like your all about me was the amount of words. Also I liked the colours on the other hand is green your favourite colour???
Hi there Hilal, My name is Abby and I am a year 6 at Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like the way you shaded the colours of the title. How did you do it? What Kind of pizza? What position do you play in soccer? What kind of math do you want to learn? What did you do on your chromebook? What is your favorite song by Alan Walker?
Next Time you could add some more information about each of the things.
Hey Hilal! It's great to read about you and what you do/like. What made you want to make it? I have a tip for how to make the slide fit on the page, when you go to get the Embed code change the size from Large to Small. Small is the only size that will fit on blogs. Thanks! From Hannah, Year 8, Yaldhurst Model School
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Hi this is Thom from Yaldhurst school and I think this is very good there is lot's of cool things about you.Next time I think you should recommend putting the information on different slides.
hi hilal i'm louis from yaldhurst model school.i liked how you put your favourite food on your post. next time you should do a slide instsed.i liked it when you said you like pizza.
Hi I am Alize from Yaldhurst school. what I like your all about me was the amount of words. Also I liked the colours on the other hand is green your favourite colour???
Hi there Hilal, My name is Abby and I am a year 6 at Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like the way you shaded the colours of the title. How did you do it? What Kind of pizza? What position do you play in soccer? What kind of math do you want to learn? What did you do on your chromebook? What is your favorite song by Alan Walker?
Next Time you could add some more information about each of the things.
Kind regards, Abby.
Hi Hilal it's Mikael from yaldhurst school. I like how you shade the title. next time I think you should put the information on both sides.
Hey Hilal!
It's great to read about you and what you do/like. What made you want to make it? I have a tip for how to make the slide fit on the page, when you go to get the Embed code change the size from Large to Small. Small is the only size that will fit on blogs.
Thanks!
From Hannah,
Year 8,
Yaldhurst Model School
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